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Yea, there pretty good the first time you read them. I've read most but havn't had the grampa one before. I wounder how many there are?

The space Marines.... Kinda how i imagine World war three. Or even Fallout before the bombs dropped. Mass army of people in power armour. Enjoy Thanks go to ksurf.net for this picture.

Laff, good pictures :) Butt anyway, it seems Bush is hell bent on supposedly 'making things right in the middle east. George W Bush and the last crusade...

Not bad. This is starting to come along well. Be looking forward to see where this is gonna go with the vault an all. I aint really got time now but i'll try and add some more constructive comments later... Ciaos

Watching silently as the last cart disappeared out of view and into the night’s bleak darkness, Rogue couldn’t manage to shake the feeling that something was just plain not right about things. Then come to think of it, she was getting these feelings an awful lot lately and probably with juste...

Heh heh, i remember the fight between Caleb and Mandrake well. I'm not gonna mention much different to what Welsh and Gunslinger have stated but as you guys have pointed out, somtimes introducing an NPC or taking control of one that allready exists (There are pleanty of them) can give you...

OOC- Sorry, this is slightly rushed but i have limited time during brake. IC- Talon froze for a slight second, taking a quick moment to scan the room before entering. Rogue and Grim followed Talon into the tent. “Must have taken the body to Ibis.” He mumbled to the others...

Didn't get to see the foot notes but i'd generally agree with Gunslingers post. But anyways, nice start. Be looking forward to seeing how the rest goes.

Is it out yet? I havn't had time to visit the a games store latly and i would relly like to get this game

Vehicle of the future. Kind off looks like somthing from Mad Max...might actually be somthing from Mad Max?

ICC- Time its self seemed to have frozen as One fell down through darkness for what seemed like an eternity. As he fell, memory’s of old times flashed before his eyes. It was as though he was watching a vid of his past. He saw his family as a boy, his training days as an initiate...

Halloween as kind of lost its touch around where i live. Its not magical anymore like it was when i was little. Now we just get 10-15 year old kids who see it as a way to make some easy money. They don't get dressed in costumes or anything and when you tell them to go away they hail abuse at...

ICC- Grim raced towards the closest building to his position which was a rotten looking one, like it was on its last legs after many hard years of wear and tare. The mass of metal armour followed closely on Grim’s heals with ripper in hand. The power armoured soldier was close enough for...

Ok... An example of not taking enough time with your writing. You need to add more description and elaborate on the situations happening. That way people will not interpret the story incorrectly. Ok, it's your first Fan Fic so more the reason to listen to what other people are saying...

Ok, this is your first RP, then as a new comer, take the advice that the more experienced writers here are giving you because up to now you haven't. Its the only way your going to get through this and improve. One other thing i forgot to mention in my earlier post. You really need to add some...

PyschoSniper, a word of advice, read the criticism’s that people give you and read them well! You would be surprised how much feedback they will give you about how you can improve your Fic. I'm not trying to be bitchy about this, but from what I just read, you didn't listen to a word those...

Ok I haven't said much yet and I don't really wish too. I'm not in the best position to talk but I was just wondering about something... PyschoSniper, you talked about your character being in Bio med, I presume you mean at the Sierra Army depot (Correct me if im wrong of course). Now you talk...

I may not be the best person to comment but i enjoyed reading that. Nice humour, especially with the Dook's. Ciaos

hmmm, i'd have to agree. 500 shots is a lot of ammo to be slugging around for a single weapon.

Should the ultimate sentence be brought back to our justice systems? If someone takes a life in cold blood, should he/she not have his life taken in return? We were having this discussion in one of my IT classes earlier (because we always talk about such matters while working in ICT...