Here it is: As I Walk These Broken Roads The new and improved version of what was previously called The Wasteland. I'd like to thank Botia and TorontRayne for their posts, as well as everyone who's given me constructive criticism: I'd especially like to thank Silencer for pdf-ing and hosting this for me. I went back over everything, filled out the characters more, and worked on smoothing out the plot a bit. This has caused my girlfriend to comment that W & R "seem alot less gay," . . . Thanks sweetie. I apologize for being slow on getting the second part out - it's written, but needs a bit of massaging into something good. Up 'til now I've been without a laptop, working away from home, so I've been relying on borrowed computers. Now that I have one, my productivity will go up. Once again: any and all comments are welcome. Your criticisms helps me write better.