Hi Killap, I have two little suggestions concerning the EPA. 1.) The Head of security uses german curse words. But it sounds a bit forced and out of place. It actually sounds like a non-german speaker wrote the dialogues (I hope I don't insult anyone here). As a native speaker I was happy that you incorporated a reference to germany, but I was also a bit dissapointed with the implementation. 2.) Kitsume's story about the two different eyes is a pretty blunt plagiarism of the "Cowboy Bebop" character Spike Spiegel. The thing with the japanese name was pointed out before, but i'd like to mention it again . ----------- Thank you for the RP by the way. Great work.